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Rue The Song Of Angels by ~Pishkin:iconPishkin:



Silent on this winter night, falling from my father's eyes
Desperately I shun the light, beckoning the demon's cries.
Temples built of land and stone crashing to that very soil,
Now ruined just like broken bones the monastery plot is foiled.

"Hear me father, hear my cries, for have burnt this house of lies.
Deliver me to prosperity and free me of this anarchy."
But silent remains this winter night.
My weapons brandished as I rue the song of angels.

No men nor women, elders nor children.
Pile what remains onto the pyre.
a drought of emotions as vast as the oceans.
The dust and ash curve into gyres.

"Hear me father, hear my plight, for I have rid you of mankind
Deliver me your sanctity and rid me of severity."
But silent remains the empty skies.
My faith has vanished as I rue the song of angels.

I am the Adam of this land bereft of life
and the Eve of my death enkindles every night.
Even in my Eden I'm haunted in secrecy,
as serpents and saviors wage battles over me.

"Oh father take your light and serpents take your darkness
for neither deserves the soul rotting in my carcass."
And silent remained the knight,
as he rode off on his steed and rued the song of angels.

~Déal~
©2009 ~Pishkin
:iconpishkin:

Author's Comments

I haven't posted anything in a good long while and I hope to change that as of right now. I've been working hard at my writing to make it much better then before. I hope what I have created here is enjoyed by those who read it. please comment.

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:icondarkestshadowz:
You're ALIVE!!!
It's so good you're back! :hug:
I really like this one =]

"I am the Adam of this land bereft of life
and the Eve of my death enkindles every night.
Even in my Eden I'm haunted in secrecy,
as serpents and saviors wage battles over me."
I really like that part ..
:heart:

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:iconpishkin:
I glad you like it. I hope to be posting more soon when my writing hand gets moving again. It shouldn't take me long I'm sure. Hah I can't believe you're even still around though I knew if anyone left me a comment it'd be you :P

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You feel so justified in actions that you take,
fabricating dishonest mistakes
You reap what you sow,
the burden that you bear will be inhuman but fair,
It will be fair, it will be fair!!!
:icondarkestshadowz:
Haha
Yes well, I'm glad you're back!
What happened to your hand anyway?
I almost broke my arm a few weeks ago =P

:heart:

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:iconpishkin:
oh haha nothing is wrong with my hand I just haven't been writing a lot in the last little while. That's too bad about your arm. How'd you break it if you don't mind my asking.
:icondarkestshadowz:
Ohh haha ok.
Um, I was bobsledding and hit a turn bit too fast and I swear I heard my arm crunch but I think I just fractured it.. But not bad enough to need a cast which is good =]
I almost had to get stitches cause it ripped my arm open a bit.. That was early January and my arm still hurts =[
It was the most exciting thing that happened to me in my holidays and now I have a scar!
=D

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:iconpishkin:
Ouch sounds like it hurts. A friend of mine had something really big fall onto his fingers and they literally exploded from the sides...it looked pretty gross for a bit lol.
:icondarkestshadowz:
Ewww
I hope he's ok now though.
It's so hard not being able to use your hands. You can't do anything!

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